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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。Li Hua and I were neighboures and we went to same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch an umbrella. It happens that Li Hua was just around the corner and be offered to share her umbrella with me. He made apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.

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小题1:to∧The 小题2:friend改成friends 小题3:去掉with 小题4:such 改成so 小题5:long改成longer 小题6:realize 改成realizing 小题7:happens改成happened 小题8:her改成his 小题9:gently改成 gentle 小题10:but 改成and

小题1:the表示特指同一所学校 小题2:主语是复数，指我们是好朋友 小题3:去掉with，这里表示有很多东西分享，不是和某人分享。 小题4:用so修饰后面的形容词angry 小题5:not any longer="no" longer不再 小题6:without是介词，后面接动名词 小题7:本文主体时态为过去时 小题8:主语是he，是男性，故使用his 小题9:用形容词修饰名词voice 小题10:句意：我原谅了他并给他一个拥抱，没有转折关系，只是顺接关系 点评：短文改错对考生的语法和上下文串联的要求最高。考生要非常细心的串联上下文进行语法分析，再提出修改。