Question

写关于90后的英语作文！——新月月考高三诊断考试作文！

在当今社会上，有些人认为：“九零后”的行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请根据下面的信息，阐述观点，帮助人们消除忧虑。
人们对“九零后”的忧虑：依赖性强........、（请根据实际情况，再列举至少两点）
“九零后”的长处：敢于挑战......（请根据实际情况，再列举至少两点）

PS：希望你的作文符合高中水平，多使用定语从句（最重要），分词结构，倒装句，特殊句式，请不要有语法错误，我也会仔细鉴赏你的美文的，悬赏给的较高，劳烦各位英语达人们了，如果作文较好，追加五十！

Answer 1

Talking about After 90s'
People call those After 90s',who were born after 1990s.They have much in common.First of all,most of them are the only child of their families.Besides,they hardly go through a hard time or suffer poverty.
That causes some problems,which attract people's great concerns .Some people suppose that After 90s' don't have a good value or hehavior.They care much about themselves but less about others or society.They ask for much and give less.What's more,After 90s' are not independent.They rely on their parents a great deal.Being adults,some of them can not even look after themselves
However ,others hold a viewpoit that After 90s' have some advantages too.They are well-educated and have a good command of professional knowledge.They are not afraid of difficulties.On the contrary,they can face all kinds of challenges.Meanwhile,After 90s' are energetic and smart.They have the ability to undertake the social responsibilities.

限于水平，文尽于此，供你参考，祝你进步！

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After 90s' don't have a good value or hehavior. 笔误啊 呵呵 英语高手是不一样啊
层次清楚 段楼分明 观点明晰 谢谢 追加你50

Answer 2

楼主，我来帮助你了！There are some disadvantages of people who are born after 1990, for example people depending on someone else when doing something difficult. Also people doing something just focus on themselves and ignore what does other people thinking. Moreover, people tends to have a comfortable life. However, to be one of 1990th, people want to know more about the environment around them. They have independent and new ideas, also they have ability to challenge new things.

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who are born 改成were people depending on 应该是depends吧 when doing 主句从句谓语动词都没有，应该可以改为when meet something difficult .Also people doing something just focus on themselves 不用doing something what does other people thinking宾语从句 陈述句语序 what other people think我觉得将全文的people改成they应该要好些吧 1990th,好像没得这种写法 呵呵 虽然有错，但你为我提供素材 谢谢了

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呵呵！大学毕业两年了，好多都忘了！

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没关系 谢谢！sincerely