英文作文 关于hobby
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CORRECTION~~ 好有问题= = What is your favourite hobby? If you don’t have any hobbies
your life will not be content .When I was ten years ’old
my grandmother told me about the importance of hobby
she always said that the hobby could 1. broanden our horizon and enrich our studying school life . 2. Because of her words and encouragements I am the student of Queen Maud Secondary School
which is a popular and tremendous institute in Hong Kong nowadays. However
when I 3 .ca me back to home
my grandmother’s breath have disappeared in the air. 4. Although the willing of my grandma have not been statisfied
i think she would 5. liked our family can be more harmony and solidarity. 6. And the most important thing that she bequeathed to me was the words of emphasizing the importances of the hobbies. It always rings my bell. From then on
i hope i can have a hobby so i engage in the reading club
7. which further improves my self-management. It is extremely beneficial to my school life. This shows hobby is a key which can improve our life and makes us be 8. a polite person. daily life cannot be improved= = 只会the quality of daily life can be improved 所以就改左做上面咁 我知你系想讲因为你GRANDMA讲过HOBBY好紧要 同埋系可以令到你IMPROVE YOUR DAILY LIFE. 而就系因为咁你先入到一间好中学. 我觉得如果你唔DESCRIBE下间学校会点 出面D人唔会知道你间学校系好定差. grammatical mistake 你GRANDMA 死左系之前的事 咩系Although my grandmother haven't needed anything that she wanted= = 完全唔知你讲咩 无左WOULD好似好D 我知你系想讲话你GRANDMA 最影响到你的系叫你参加HOBBIES 不过你咁样写唔系好顺 咩系bring up a good character to help by myself. 你系唔系想讲自我管理>? 系SELF-MANAGEMENT 同埋你之后讲的野都同SELF-MANAGEMENT无关系 problems of article by WInG~~~ 2010-10-28 19:13:56 补充： SORRY 上面唔应该系POINT FORM 应该系须住1234567咁去
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your life will not be content .When I was ten years ’old
my grandmother told me about the importance of hobby
she always said that the hobby could 1. broanden our horizon and enrich our studying school life . 2. Because of her words and encouragements I am the student of Queen Maud Secondary School
which is a popular and tremendous institute in Hong Kong nowadays. However
when I 3 .ca me back to home
my grandmother’s breath have disappeared in the air. 4. Although the willing of my grandma have not been statisfied
i think she would 5. liked our family can be more harmony and solidarity. 6. And the most important thing that she bequeathed to me was the words of emphasizing the importances of the hobbies. It always rings my bell. From then on
i hope i can have a hobby so i engage in the reading club
7. which further improves my self-management. It is extremely beneficial to my school life. This shows hobby is a key which can improve our life and makes us be 8. a polite person. daily life cannot be improved= = 只会the quality of daily life can be improved 所以就改左做上面咁 我知你系想讲因为你GRANDMA讲过HOBBY好紧要 同埋系可以令到你IMPROVE YOUR DAILY LIFE. 而就系因为咁你先入到一间好中学. 我觉得如果你唔DESCRIBE下间学校会点 出面D人唔会知道你间学校系好定差. grammatical mistake 你GRANDMA 死左系之前的事 咩系Although my grandmother haven't needed anything that she wanted= = 完全唔知你讲咩 无左WOULD好似好D 我知你系想讲话你GRANDMA 最影响到你的系叫你参加HOBBIES 不过你咁样写唔系好顺 咩系bring up a good character to help by myself. 你系唔系想讲自我管理>? 系SELF-MANAGEMENT 同埋你之后讲的野都同SELF-MANAGEMENT无关系 problems of article by WInG~~~ 2010-10-28 19:13:56 补充： SORRY 上面唔应该系POINT FORM 应该系须住1234567咁去
ok ok very good
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