Question

短文改错when i was twenty

短文改错when i was twenty

Answer 1

When my twentieth birthday came, I was not at home.
In order to celebrate such an important day with my
parents,I wrote them a letter, in which I thanked them
for having raised me for twenty years, and expressed
my love to them. Later my mother called me when they
read the letter,tears filled her eyes. But my father
appeared much cooler. After that,he read it alone carefully, and then he has put it into a desk drawer.I can imagine the scene clearly because I know him well. Being a man with few words, he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way.

Answer 2

When I was twenty years old .