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Good morning , everyone,It’sgreat honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li

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Good morning , everyone,

It’s
great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born of a
harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teacher
. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve
developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy –going ,
get along well with my classmates.

It is this personality which helps me win over all my
classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many
difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in
your University has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream
constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy
with the help of the respectable professors; I dream that I will
swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.

I hope all my dream will come true in the near future.

Thank you.

Answer 1

Good morning , everyone,

It’s
great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born （FROM） a
harmonious family. My father and mother are （BOTH） high school （TEACHERS）
. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early (CHILDHOOD), but I’ve
developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy –going ,（AND）
get along well with my classmates.

It is this personality （THAT） helps me win over all my
classmates’ friendships, and also （HELPS） me overcome many
difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in
your University has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream
constantly that I, along with （MY） classmates, will study （HAPPILY）
with the help of the respectable professors; I dream that I will
swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.

I hope all my (DREAMS) will come true in the near future.

Thank you.

Answer 2

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