Question

帮忙看几道高一英语改错题题吧，摆脱附上解析哈。

1.The American Civil was broken out in 1861.
2.Seeing from a distance,it looked likea human face.
3.These pens are yours.Those ones are mine.
4.The left bag in the roon is my brother's.
5.He was badly wounded and made his way on to the seashore.
6.A great many us have pen friends.
7.I asked hin to tell me that how much he paid a year for his son's education.
8. It is I who is your ture friend.
9. To teach is learning.

Answer 1

更正楼上第7/8/9题！

1. 去掉was
break out是不及物动词短语，没有被动语态
2. Seeing改成Seen
分词的逻辑主语it和see之间为被动关系，所以用过去分词seen
3. 去掉ones
those不能修饰代词，其本身就可做代词
4. 题目有问题，肯定是楼主打字有误，因为你还把room错打成了roon
5. and改成but
on并无错误，它是副词，意思是“继续”。
句意前后明显为转折。
6. many和us中间加入of
a great/good many修饰代词时，必须加上of
7. 去掉that
宾语从句的引导词只能有一个，how much就是此从句的引导词，that多余
8. is改成am
who代指I，所以后面用am，不用is
9. To teach改成Teaching 或 learning改成to learn
做主语/表语的结构如果相似，则必须形式一致，要么都用不定式，要么都用动名词。

Answer 2

1.The American Civil broke out in 1861.
不要用被动语态，战争不是“被”发生
2.seen
东西是被看起来像的
3.去掉ones
重复啦
4.没错吧- -意思有点奇怪
5.去掉on made one‘s way to固定搭配
6.A great many of us have pen friends. a great many 后面直接加名词的
7. 觉得整句超级啰嗦= =要我改的话就改成I asked him how much he paid for his son's education per year.
8. It is me who is your ture friend.
9.没问题 或者改成Teaching is learning.比较一致

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