Question

英语翻译~高手请进~

Closely related with this is the capacity to be tolerant of the weaknesses and immaturity of human nature which induce people to make mistakes.
人们的宽容程度与人类天生的懦弱和不成熟导致犯错是紧密相连的.
这样翻译对么?我觉得怪怪的= =
高手请指点!

Answer 1

与之紧密相关的是（Closely related with this is ）
（那种）能减少人们犯错的（which induce people to make mistakes）
对人性自身的弱点和不成熟的（of the weaknesses and immaturity of human nature）
容忍能力（the capacity to be tolerant）

也就是说，宽容is closely related with this.‘this’要联系上文了

Answer 2

密切相关，这是能力，以宽容的弱点和不成熟的人的本性，这促使人们作出错误