Question

高中英语改错求大神帮帮忙

Answer 1

When I was 10, I was asked to make a speech naming(改为named) “My Dream” before the whole class. With so many eyes fixed upon me, you can imagine how nervous I was. However, I had no choice but (增加to) prepare for it. To draft the speech was the easiest for me, the(改为a) good writer, but the hard(改为hardest) part lay in my oral presentation from my memory. The real moment came while(改为when) I stood on the platform, my heart was(删掉was) beating fast and my mind blank. Much to my surprise, the listeners were sitting quietly and wait(改为waiting) patiently without any signs of rushing me. Gradually I found me(改为myself) back. When I finished my speech, my audience applauded wild(改为wildly). I made it! From then on, my fear of talking before an audience disappears(改为disappeared).