Question

这是给我将要去实习的公司的上司写的英文邮件，求大神帮我改改语法或者改的更加地道一点，谢谢

Dear Madam:

Hello! I am XX, who is going to be an intern for the financial and professional college student exchange program.I'm writing this letter for you just want to ask some question about this internship:
1.What time do I go to the company? Do I need to go to the company to get to know the situation in advance?

2.Before the internship,what preparations do I need to make? What do I need to learn in advance is good for internship.

3. Are there any other things that I need to pay attention to?

I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you have other questions, please contact me at anytime.

Yours sincerely

Answer 1

Dear Madam:
Thank you for reading this email. My name is XX, I am going to be an intern of the financial and professional college student exchange program. Writing this letter, I would like to ask you some questions about my internship:
1.When shall I go to the company? Can I arrive at the company ahead of schedule to make preparations?
2.Could you give me some advice about what I should do or learn to get ready for the internship?
3. Are there any special concerns that I need to pay attention to?
I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you have any questions, please feel free to inform me.
Best Regards.
xxxx
我按我的习惯改了一些动词/名词，但是这不关键，用词只要对方看得懂就好。
其实你只要多用would should could may这种词就好了。会显得比较客气，语气没那么激烈。