Question

麻烦老师帮我修改一下该英语作文的语法错误

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Answer 1

一段最后一句改成Now I'd like to tell you some which you might be intrested in.
二段中间We yong people去掉we，或改成the most yong people
倒数第三行去掉kind of

Answer 2

travel， to travel， because I can obtain knowledge from books, I believe that in this holiday I will be very happy!