Question

短文改错

mr.smith had a 8-year-old son named tony,who enjoyed
listening to music very much.so he bought a piano to tony,
hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day.the little
boy put his heart practising the piano day after day and seemed
to enjoy every minute of it. however,half a year later,he told
his father that he was tiring of practising the piano.hearing this,
mr.smith said,"tony,it is one thing to be fond of listen to music,
but it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself.you
can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more.
mr.smith had a 8-year-old son named tony,who enjoyed
listening to music very much.so he bought a piano to tony,
hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day.the little
boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed
enjoy every minute of it. however,half a year later,he told
his father that he was tiring of practising the piano.heard this,
mr.smith said,"tony,it is one thing to be fond of listen to music,
but it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself.you
can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more.

Answer 1

保证准确率！

1. a改成an
2. to改成for
3. can改成could
4. heart和practising中间加入into
5. 无错
6. tiring改成tired
7. listen改成listening
8. skillul改成skillfully
9. 去掉even

怎么只有九行？楼主是不是漏打了东西？
我记得做过这题，还有一行是：no one can easily succeed without hard work and experiencing difficulty.
这一行更正是：and改成or

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追问

按照下面的改呢

追答

1. a改成an
2. to改成for
3. can改成could
4. her改成his
5. enjoy前面加上to
6. tiring改成tired（还有一个Heard改成Hearing，是不是又打错了，呵呵）
7. listen改成listening
8. skillul改成skillfully
9. 去掉even

不过如果第六行有两个错误的话，倒是总共有十个错误了。