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Myhometownthereusedtobeatemplewithahistoryofovereighthundredsyears.Itliesinavalleywit... My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists
came visit it every day.They took photo;they wrote down their names on the walls;they were brought food and drink and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.
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My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies(修改laid) in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists
came visit it every day.They took photo(修改为:photoes);they wrote down their names on the walls;they (were删除) brought food and drink(修改为drank) and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of(加a) sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly(修改为whole) temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.
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In my hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight (hundreds改成hundred) years. It (lies改成lay) in a valley with green hills around it. It was (such改成so) beautiful and famous that many tourists came (加入to) visit it every day. They took (photo改成photos);they wrote down their names on the walls;they (去掉were) brought food and drink and left rubbish everywhere. One day some tourists (did改成made) a fire to cook food near the temple. All of (加入a) sudden,a strong wind blew.The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the (wholly改成whole) temple was burned out and only a (little改成few) walls remained.The beautiful temple disappeared.

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