Question

有语法错误么？

she looked ragged and walking as if each step were painful有语法错误么

Answer 1

She looks raggedand walks as if every step is painful.改成这样比较好。walking不太合适。

追问

就and前后时态一致呗

追答

对

Answer 2

she looked ragged and was walking shakily as if each step were painful.
walking 不是一个真正的动词，更不能和 ragged 一起共享 looked. 而且这里有点奇怪，走路像每一步很痛。加上一点描述好一些。