Question

求帮忙修改下我翻译的文章，原文是英文科技文献，我翻译好了，谁能帮我修改下啊！有点长哦。。

我不着急要的，一个星期都可以。995把。。。可以的说下
Passive optical networks are the most important
class of fiber access systems in the world
today. This article first reviews the reasons why
the PON as a general architecture is so important.
We then outline in some depth the technologies
used to implement this architecture,
including the G-PON and E-PON systems being
deployed today, and the advanced PON systems
that provide the evolution path to ever higher
bandwidths.
我写的中文
无源光网络是当今世界上最重要的一类光接入网。本文首先回顾了无源光网络作为一个普通的体系结构为什么会如此重要。然后我们再深入概述下用来实这种系结构的技术，包括现在正在发展的吉比特无源光网络和以太无源光网络系统，还有先进的能提供实现更高带宽的发展路径的无源光网络系统。

Answer 1

修改比翻译还难哦
放上需要翻的东西内容啊