Question

帮帮忙吧！英语改错九处！（最好加上解释和翻译，谢谢！）

The summer vacation is close.The morning ,I ask my mom if I could travel to Beijing with my classmate during the summer vacation.She said yes.I was very upset.I thought she would let me to relax for at least several days during the vacation,but she refused. I know why. She thinks traveling take too much time.She wants me to study during the vacation.Now I'm learing the piano,ballet and any other things.It seems that I'm just learing machine.What I wish she would know that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!Lucky,my dad promised he would let me relax for several days.Tanks,Dad.

Answer 1

The summer vacation is close. (On) the morning【表示当天早上】 ,I ask(ed) 【过去时态】my mom if I could travel to Beijing with my classmate during the summer vacation. She (didn't say) yes【根据前后文，要不然就说“没说同意”，要不就是“说不行”，你自己选择一下】.I was very upset.I (had) 【过去的过去】thought she would let me (to去掉)【let sb do】 relax for at least several days during the vacation,but she refused. I know why. She thinks traveling take(s)【动名词作主语用三单】 too much time.She wants me to study during the vacation.Now I'm learing (to play) the piano,ballet and (any去掉)【any other后跟名词单数，用在比较级之后】 other things.It seems that I'm just (a) 【需要加冠词】learing machine.What【how 跟 what 都差不多可以说的通】 I wish she would (know改成understand)【“理解”会好点吧】 that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!(Luckily)【作状语要用副词】,my dad promised he would let me relax for several days.(Thanks)【这个应该是拼写错误吧】,Dad.试着改了改~你看看

Answer 2

The summer vacation is close. (The->This) morning ,I ask my mom if I could travel to Beijing with my classmate during the summer vacation.She said (yes->no). I was very upset.I thought she would let me (to->删除） relax for at least several days during the vacation,but she refused. I know why. She thinks traveling （take->takes) too much time.She wants me to study during the vacation.Now I'm (learing->learning) the piano,ballet and (any->every) other things.It seems that I'm just (learing->a learning) machine.(What->删除或改为 How) I wish she would know that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!(Lucky->Luckily),my dad promised he would let me relax for several days.(Tanks->Thanks),Dad.

找出了10个，其中俩是拼错 （learning / Thanks) 不知其中之一是不是漏打的。

Answer 3

is close改为is closing ask 改为asked一般过去时 Lucky改为Luckily副词
take加s单三 The改为This固定搭配 any改为some肯定
What改为How感叹句 Tanks和learing这两处是不是你打错了呢应该是Thanks和learning yes改为no否定 let me to删除let sb.do