谁能帮忙做一下这道改错,谢谢了(应该是有十处错误)
YesterdaywasSunday.Mymothertoldmebuysomefruit.ThenearestmarketwasthreeblocksawaysoIha...
Yesterday was Sunday.My mother told me buy some fruit.The nearest market was three blocks away so I have to take a bus.The bus was so crowded that I coulden't even stood straight.When I got to a market,I found that my wallet was missed.Not knowing what to do,I cried sad.After a while,a kind lady came over and asked me how I was crying.After hearing my story,she immediately gave me some money.I thanked him and went back home.When I arrived home,my mother was about to leave to find out me.She didn't punish me for losing the money,but told me to be less careful when taking a bus the next time
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Yesterday was Sunday.My mother told me (1 加to)buy some fruit.The nearest market was three blocks away so I have (2. 改have为had) to take a bus.The bus was so crowded that I coulden't even stood (3. 改stood为stand) straight.When I got to a (4. 改a为the) market,I found that my wallet was missed (5. 改missed为missing) .Not knowing what to do,I cried sad (6. 改sad 为 sadly).After a while,a kind lady came over and asked me how (7.改how为why) I was crying.After hearing my story,she immediately gave me some money.I thanked him (8. 改him为her) and went back home.When I arrived home,my mother was about to leave to find out (9. 去掉out) me.She didn't punish me for losing the money,but told me to be less (10. 改less为more) careful when taking a bus the next time
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Yesterday was Sunday. My mother told me TO buy some fruit. The nearest market was three blocks away so I HAD to take a bus. The bus was so crowded that I couldn't even STAND straight. When I got to THE market, I found that my wallet was MISSING. Not knowing what to do, I cried and WAS sad. After a while, a kind lady came over and asked me WHY I was crying. After hearing my story, she immediately gave me some money. I thanked HER and went back home. When I arrived home, my mother was about to leave to find ** me. She didn't punish me for losing the money, but told me to be MORE careful when taking a bus ** next time.
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