Question

高中英语改错题

Dear Ralph，Iam a newcomer here from a small town.I would describe myself as shy and quiely.before myclassmates.it seems always difficult for me to do thing well as them. I,am sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.So feel unhappy every day.Besides,I have few friends.I don,t hnow that they don,tlike to talk with me. Sometimes,we talked to each other very well in class,but after class we become stranger at once.I amtrying to imporve thesituation since it doesn,t seem to work. Can you tell meabout wuat i should do.每行一个错，共九行，要说改的理由。

Answer 1

1.would--划掉（时态不对） 2.quietly--quiet (和shy一样，是并列形容词) 3.thing--things (总是做的肯定不是一件事，呵呵) 4.laugh后面的to 改为at (laugh at 是固定短语 嘲笑的意思) 5. So 后面加上I 做主语 6.know 后面的that 改为 why (根据句义，应该是说我不知道他们为什么不愿意和我说话) 7.talked--talk (这里叙述的是经常反复发生的情况，应该用一般现在时) 8.stranger--strangers (我们是主语，陌生人当然不会是一个人啦) 9.since--but(我很努力，但是似乎不奏效)

Answer 2

I could have helped her but she didn’t ask me to （help her）.应保留to，略去help her When I have free time, I go on a long walk…..