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假如你是Jim，你的中国朋友李明来信说他因为身材矮小，相貌丑陋，有时会受到同学的讥笑，因而心情很郁闷。请你给他写封回信，阐述你对人的外表的看法，并劝慰他，告诉他走出困境的建议。
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Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
亲爱的李明，
I'm sorry to know that your classmates laughed at you because you are neither high or good-looking.
听说你的同学嘲笑你身材不高，长相不好，我很抱歉。
What I want to let you know is that gold will glitter one day.
我想告诉你，是金子总会发光的。
I'm very glad that I can have a friend like you.
我很高兴能有你这样的朋友。
And I believe that you will be a successful man in the future.
我相信，你日后一定会成功的。
My advice is that you shall not be sad for those words because they don't really know you.
我的建议是，你不该为他们的话而难过，因为他们并不真的懂你。
Next time, you may tell them that they shall not judge a book by it's cover.
下次，你可以告诉他们，人不可貌相，海水不可斗量。
And show them your advantages.
还有向他们展示你的优点。
In this way, I believe that they will realize the mistake them have made.
这样，我相信，他们会认识到他们之前的错误。
Good luck to you！
祝你好运！

Yours Sincerely,
你真诚的，
Jim
吉姆

Answer 2

Dear Liming,
I have received your letter , and I have known something about you . Don't be unhappy,Although you are short, you can do well in sports. what's more.You are really excellent,you study hard on each subject,appearance can't show everything ,You are the best in my heart.Don't be afraid of being made fun of ,your are a strong person,I believe you can make much progress, In a word ,you should keep in a good mood,everything will be better.
I am looking forward to receiving your letter soon
Yours,
jim

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