Question

请将这段翻译成英文（400分问题）

亲爱的Gary XXXX教授(他是男的)：
您好！我是一名来自中国的钢琴专业学生。我一直十分仰慕和向往XXXInstitute of music---这所世界上最著名的music school。然而由于我去年准备不充分，加之入学竞争又十分激烈，我在最后一刻放弃了报考贵校。虽然目前我就读于XXX conservatory of music，但我并不满足与仅在这样档次的学校学习。我决心于明年报考XXXInstitute of music，并已经准备好了全部曲目。
自我开始学琴的时候，我就知道您---这位世界著名的大钢琴家，教育家。我自幼就向往能成为您的学生，然而由于我不在美国，因此一直无法实现我的愿望。
我目前住在XXX市。由于星期六星期日是双休日，所以我希望能在这两天到xxx市来跟您上课。我十分希望得到您的指点，还望您能在百忙之中，抽出一点时间来满足我这一个小小的愿望。不过如果您星期六星期日没有时间的话，周一到周五也可以，尽管我可能会有些课，但我保证一定能够排除万难，在任何您指定的时间到达。只要您能在每周的任何时候抽出一个小时的时间给我上一堂课，我就十分感激了。
我热切的盼望您的回复，谢谢！
（我这完全都是按中文的书信写的，如果不太符合美国信的写法大家帮我改一下啊，还有，不用逐字翻，意思到位就好了，谢谢大家啊）
好象都有点小问题啊,有人肯定哪个是准确无误的吗?因为这封E-MAIL很重要,要影响我一生的...后面的人不要抄前面的啊
我在美国,我不是没录取,是没考.
太感谢大家的建议了!

Answer 1

The dear Gary XXXX teaches:
How do you do!I am a piano which comes from China professional student.I have been admiring and looking forward to XXXInstitute of music very-This is in the world most the music school of 著 .However because I prepared insufficiency last year, adding it to enter school a competition again very vigorous, I at end a moment gave up to register for examination an expensive school.Although I study in the of music of the XXX conservatory currently, I dissatisfied foot with only at this of school study.My decision will register for examination XXXInstitute of music next year, and have already got ready all songs.
The ego beginning learns the time of piano, I know you-this of big pianist, educator.I looked forward to the student who can become you since childhood, however I ain't in the United States, so has been can't carrying out my wishes.
I live in the XXX City currently.Because Saturday Sunday is the double rests a day, so I hope to go to xxx City to come to have a class with you in this two days.I hope getting you points out very, also hoping you can draw out a little time to satisfy my this very small wishes in 100 favours.However if you have no horary words on Saturday Sunday, from Monday to Friday can also, though I may some lessons, my promising can certainly overcome all difficulties, arriving in any time that you specify.As long as you can draw out time to give me previous lesson for a hour at any time in every week, I feel grateful very.
I am hot to slice of hope your reply, thanks!

Answer 2

Hello! I am a professional student of piano from China. I have been admiring and yearning for XXXInstitute of music very much all the time ---This most famous music school in the world. But because I planned last year to be insufficient, in addition the competition of entering school was very fierce, I have given up entering for your school at the last moment. Though I attend XXX conservatory of music at present, I am unsatisfied with and study only in the school of such grade. I am determined to enter for XXXInstitute of music next year, and has already got all songs ready.
While beginning to study the musical instrument oneself, I know you ---This great world-famous pianist, educationist. I have yearned for becoming your students since the childhood, but not in U.S.A. because of me, so can't realize my hope all the time.
I live in XXX city at present. Because is two-day weekend on Saturday Sunday, I hope to come to xxx city to have a class with you these two days. I hope instruction to receive you very much, look at you can in the midst of pressing affairs, take out, come, meet I the light little hope any time. But if you are not free on Saturday Sunday, it is possible from Monday to Friday, though I may have some lessons, I guarantee to clear away all obstacles and surmount every difficulty, arrive any time that you appoint. So long as you can spare one time for hour give me previous sessions of lesson in weekly a any time, I am very grateful

Answer 3

Dear Gary professor:
How do you do! I am a professional piano student form China. I always want to study in well-known xxx institute of music school. Whereas I have not ample prepare and quite enrollment competitive last year so that I give up to enter the school at the last time. Even though I am learning xxx conservatory of music, but I am not satisfactory learning school in which just so baddish. I have decided to enter xxx institute of music for examination next year and have already prepare all song. I have known that you are one famous pianist and educator of world since I start to learn piano. So I want to be your student when I am a child, because of I am not in America so that my dream have not come true all the time.
I am living xxx city now. I want to listen to your class on Saturday or Sunday. I hope that your can give me some advices in your little time to let my dream come true. If Sat. or Sun you have no time, form the Mon. to Fri. is ok, Even though I have some classes but I assure that I will arrive at your class in your time no matter any difficulty. As long as you have one hour give me class every week, I appreciate you keen sincerely.
I look forward your letter keenly. Thank you very much!

Answer 4

Dear Professor Gary XXXX:
Hello! I am come from China's piano specialized student. Icontinuously extremely admire and yearn for XXXInstitute of inmusic--- this world most famous music school. However because my lastyear prepared not fully, added the matriculation competition to beextremely intense, I have not been able to enter the school which Iyearned for. Although at present I go study to XXX conservatory ofmusic, but I certainly do not satisfy . I was determined the nextyear will register for XXXInstitute of music once more, and alreadyprepared the complete program.
Oneself start study qin time, I know that you - the world-renowned pianist large and educators, the educationalist. I yearned for since childhoodcan become you the student, however as a result of me not in US,therefore continuously is unable to realize my desire.
I at present live in XXX city. Because Saturday Sunday is double restsJapan, therefore I hoped can listen to you in these two days to xxxcity to attend class. I extremely hoped obtains your direction, evenif short several minutes Also looks you to be able in spite of beingvery busy, extracts time to satisfy I this small desire. If youSaturday Sunday do not have the time, also may, the time which assignsin any you arrive Monday through Friday. So long as you can in eachweek any time extracts for a hour the time for me on a hall class, Iextremely felt grateful.
I earnest hoped your reply, thanks!

Answer 5

然而由于我去年准备不充分，加之入学竞争又十分激烈，我在最后一刻放弃了报考贵校。

这个写法不好，因为人家对你去年如何并不感兴趣。。。。与您写信的目的无关！

虽然目前我就读于XXX conservatory of music，但我并不满足与仅在这样档次的学校学习。

这个写法不好，因为不要贬低你正在学习的学校，人家会认为你人格有问题，虽然你的目的是说明你有更高的追求！

个人看法，仅供参考！