Question

英语作文，要求如下：

中国现在有很多地方还很落后，包括科技，经济，综合素质等，很多人选择移民去国外逃避来安顿自己的生活。谈谈你认为，究竟逃避是不是一种好的做法，还是应该去承担社会责任，解决社会问题来让下一代人过得更好呢？你会选择什么？字数不限，只求表达清楚。

Answer 1

其实移民不一定是逃避,很多人移民到国外,通过学习当地文化和经济发展,社会学习实践,回国改善当地的问题.很多人出国的时候他知道有这个社会问题,他通过到国外的机会,让更多的人了解中国,了解中国的问题,引起更多人的关注,让更多人关心,共同解决,不一定是中国人,可能很多其他racial的人也会参与进来。即使他们到了国外定居，他自身就是一个中国的名片，是他所处于的那个社会人文环境的载体，哪怕他没有提及或者谈到具体的中国内部的情况，但是别人可以从他的为人处世的方式，思维模式，引申到他所曾经生活的环境。我不是特别记得有一位中国科学家到美国定居，在他带领的科研团队中，培养了许多中国科技领军人物，但是他拒绝回国进行科研工作，是因为他在美国有更多的资源，环境不是个人能够改变的，即使他回国对中国的贡献没有在美国大，可是无论有多少中国学子来向他求学，他都欢迎。

追问

那你去那学习就可以了，为什么要改变国籍呢？如果你是人才，你不愿意改国籍，别人也一定会邀请你来

Answer 2

Aithough our country has being developed rapidly,it still exsists some flieds where China can't catch up with the world's development,such as the science,the economy or the Comprehensive quality and so on.So more and more people are willing to go abroad to live a more comfortable life.
As far as I concerned,almost everyone want a better life to live.There are so many advanced things abroad which can make our lives more convenient,so this phenomenon is reasonable.But
as a Chinese,it's our duty to make contribution to our country,even if you're living in a foreign country.And you still should pay close attention to China's developement ,try your best to make our motherland better and bettter day by day.
改了一下

Answer 3

（这是我自己写的，本人今年高二）
, Aithough our country has being developed rapidly,it still exsist some flieds where China can't catch up with the world's development.Such as the science,the economy or the Comprehensive quality and so on.So more and more people are willing to go abroad to live a more comfortable life.
As far as I concerned,almost everyone want a better life to live,There so many advanced things in abroad which can make our live more convenient.so this phenomenon is reasonable.But
as a Chinese,it's our duty to make contribution to our country,even though you're in overseas.And you still should pay close attention to China's developement ,try your best to make our motherland better and bettter day by day.

追问

观点很好，我很喜欢，但是错误较多，一部分发在评论中了

追答

我修改好l啦！
（那个phenomenon是“现象”，reasonable是“合乎情理的”）
　　　Aithough our country has being developed rapidly,it still exsists some flieds where China can't catch up with the world's development,such as the science,the economy or the Comprehensive quality and so on.So more and more people are willing to go abroad to live a more comfortable life.
As far as I concerned,almost everyone want a better life to live.There are so many advanced things abroad which can make our lives more convenient,so this phenomenon is reasonable.But
as a Chinese,it's our duty to make contribution to our country,even if you're living in a foreign country.And you still should pay close attention to China's developement ,try your best to make our motherland better and bettter day by day.

追问

has been
such as in science, economy civilization and so on.
you should still pay close attention to china's development and try your best to make ,,,,

Answer 4

急吗？不急的话我要先拟一下草稿

追问

不急的，你有空给我看一下,草稿呢？

Answer 5

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