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亲爱的教授：
由于我十分想上****大学，但是我的托福成绩并不十分理想，所以我想可能有以下几点原因：
1.我从开始准备托福到考试还仅仅不到*个月的时间，众所周知，中国的英语硬式教育是与托福学习是完全不同的两个学习模式，在中国我们只学习语法和记忆单词，但是托福要求的很全面，需要听说读写样样精通。所以我在这*个月时间里并不能很系统的学习。
2.*月*日的托福考试是我的第一次考试，取得这样的成绩我很不甘心，我又费尽周折报考了**月*日的托福考试。我很有信心在**月*日的考试中取得很好的成绩。
我是个十分独立的女孩子，因为妈妈在我八岁时就去世了，父亲总是专注自己的事也给我一个好的生活环境，所以从小到大都是我一个人自觉努力学习。我完全有能力在托福考试中取得好的成绩，可能我还在需要点努力和时间。我会在**月*日成绩出来之后尽快与您联系，希望您能给我一次机会，不然我会终生后悔。
是“父亲总专注于自己的事业”

Answer 1

Dear Professor:
I really want to go to......college because I know it's a college that …………（写一些你为什么喜欢这所大学或者你为什么想去e.g. I'm keep dreaming about and I also find a lot of information about the school online which just made fall in love with this school）.But my tofel score is not that engaging, well I think about the reasons why I haven't got a good grade in Tofel test yet, and I found two reasons below:
First, I really don't have enough time to prepare the test, it's only been a month since I start known about Tofel and take the test. Well even worse is that what I learn from my high school can't help with the tofel test because what we actually do for the English class at school is learning about grammer and remember tons of vocabulary. And the tofel test is more flexible, in order to get a pleased score in tofel test we have to have comprehensive abilities such as good at listening speaking and writing. So a month is too tight for me to learn all of them.
Second, ……is my first try, I knew nothing about how everything would go before the test so I felt really nervous. And this really influnced my normal play. When I saw my grade I was really upset about it. So I try my best and I'm very lucky that I got another chance at …… And I belive that I can get a commendable grade at this time.
At last, I want to say some thing about myself. When I was 8 years old my mom died and my dad has his own business so that he don't have enought time to take care of me even though he was trying his best to gave me a good living space. But those didn't make me down. Like my friends always say that I'm an outgoing and humorous girl and also very independently, because since my mom died I tried to take care of myself and study and live all by myself. And my school grades are always really high. So I can say that I do have enough abilitles to get a high score in the coming test, all I need is a little bit more time. And I will contact you and let you know my score as soon as it comes out. I really really hope you could give me another chance, because go to ……（大学名）is my dream since I was very young! So please give me a chance and let me show you how good I am.

Answer 2

Dear professor:Because I want to * * * * University, but my TOEFL score is not very ideal, so I think there may be the following reasons:1 I began to prepare for the TOEFL examination from has not only * months, as everyone knows, Chinese English hard education is the TOEFL and learning are two entirely different learning modes, in China we only learn grammar and vocabulary memory, but the TOEFL requirement is very comprehensive, need of listening speaking reading and writing everything. So here I * months and not very systematic learning.2 * * on the TOEFL exam is my first exam, obtain such result I was reluctant, I had a hard time for the * * * on the toefl. I have every confidence in * * * on the examination to obtain good results.I am an independent girl, because my mother when I was eight years old when his father died, always focused his career, also give me a good living environment, so small to large is a conscious effort to learn. I have full capacity in the TOEFL exam get good grades, I may still need some time and effort. I will be in the * * * day out after contact with you as soon as possible, I hope you can give me a chance, I will never regret.