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尊敬的移民厅长官:

你好，我在这里很诚意的请求政府能够批准我在新加坡长期居留准证申请的批准。
我的具体情况是，女儿于2011年10月参加”O”水准考试，现在成绩公布为11分，位于全校第一名。我的女儿已经被新加坡理工学院APPLIED CHEMISTRY WITH PHARMACEUTICAL Course录取，这正是她理想的专业。作为他的母亲，我请求政府能给我多一年时间留在新加坡。
理由如下，首先，我的女儿毕竟是个女孩子，在一个陌生的国度里，独立生活的能力还是有一定限制。居住的房屋与入学的手续，还都没有完成；其实，我利用在新加坡的居住的空闲时间，自费学习了学前幼儿教育大专课程，现已读书一年半的时间了，目的是为了提升自己。无论是自身的修养、知识水准，还是道德水平，我都在努力的自我提升。这个课程还有一年我就可以毕业了，而且也已经缴纳了学费。
我恳请长官能准许我留在新加坡完成我的学业，不论将来我是否能有机会服务于新加坡这个社会。这份学习对我来说是至关重要的，经过一年来的学习，他让我对于学前幼儿教育有了更深刻的理解与更多的热忱。我有信心成为一个有耐心、爱心与责任心，并尊重一切种族文化的幼教老师。
经过这三年在新加坡的生活，我和女儿奉公守法，并努力在新加坡这个城市继续读书深造，我和女儿爱这里，也愿意为这个美丽和平的国度服务。为此，我们也努力提升自己，如果实在国小人多，也恳请我能将学业完成，实现我学习幼儿学前教学与照顾女儿的愿望。

Answer 1

To : The Controller of Immigration
Re: Application for Permanent Residence Extension
Dear Sir,
I hereby sincerely request the government will approve my application for extending my permanent residence status. My specific situation is as follows:
My daughter took the “O” Level Examination in October 2010, and the result just announced shows that she has a score of 11, and she ranks first overall in the whole school. Now she has been accepted by Singapore Polytechnic to take up APPLIED CHEMISTRY WITH PHARMACEUTICAL Course. This is exactly the ideal profession that she has been dreaming of. I sincerely hope that you will grant me to stay in Singapore for another year, so that I can continue to take care of her.
As a girl, my daughter will find it hard to live alone in a foreign country. Besides, her accommodation arrangement and school admission process has yet to be completed. By the way, I have made use of my spare time in Singapore and taken a diploma course of Early Childhood Education at my own expense; the aim is to improve myself, in fact, I have been striving to uplift my standard in terms of knowledge, ethics as well as self-quality cultivation. I have already studied this course for one and a half years and all the school fees had been paid for, but I still need to study for another year before graduation.
Sir, I earnestly request that you would allow me to stay back to complete my course which I value very much. For the past one and a half years of study, I have a deeper understanding of early childhood education and it fuels my exuberance. I am very confident that I can become a preschool teacher who respects all the ethnic cultures and possesses a lot of patience, love and responsibility.
My daughter and I have been living in Singapore for the past three years, we love it here and we respect and abide by the laws; we strive to further our studies and improve ourselves, and we are willing to render our services to this beautiful country. Even if we are not allowed to have this honor, we beg to be permitted to stay and complete the course, so that I can achieve my pre-school teaching aspiration and the desire to take care of my daughter. Thank you for your kind attention.

注：如果您发现我的翻译与原文排序有点区别，那是有意的调整。

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Answer 2

Dear immigration officer:Hello, here I am sincere request the government to approve me in Singapore permanent residence permit application is approved.My daughter is the specific situation, in 2011 October to participate in" O" level examination results announced, now 11, is located in the first place. My daughter has been APPLIED CHEMISTRY WITH PHARMACEUTICAL Course admitted to Singapore Polytechnic, and this is her ideal professional. As his mother, I asked the government to give me more time to stay in singapore.The reasons are as follows, first of all, my daughter, is a girl, in a strange country, the ability to live independently or with certain restrictions. Housing and admission procedures, also have not completed; in fact, I use in Singapore living free time, at their own expense to study the preschool education college, is now reading a year of time of half, the purpose is to upgrade their. Whether it is their own self-cultivation, knowledge, or moral level, I struggled to self promotion. This course in another year I will graduate, but also have to pay tuition fees.I ask Sir to allow me to stay in Singapore to finish my studies, no matter the future if I can have the opportunity to serve the society. This is vital for me, after a year of study, he asked me for a preschool education have a more profound understanding and more warmly. I have the confidence to be a patience, compassion and the sense of responsibility, and respect for all the ethnic culture of teachers.After three years of living in Singapore, my daughter and I respect justice and abide by the laws, and to work in Singapore this city to continue reading further, my daughter and I love it here, but also for the beautiful and peaceful country services. Therefore, we also strive to improve themselves, if it 's more than small, also ask me to finish my study, preschool teaching and take care of her daughter 's desire.