Question

帮帮忙…英语短文改错（打出来不容易啊！）

When iwas 12years old.l went to Nanjing with twoCanadian.l became their guide.First.we went to the Xuanwu Lake.They wanted to look around the by the boat.After buy the tickets.we got into a boat.we went around seeing the beautiful sight.after that.we go shopping.The sellers coudn't speak English.Though it was very harder.l tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences.They bought some little things with their help.Next.we went to a small zoo but took some pictures.when we felt hungrily.we went out and had lunch.After lunch.we visited several old house and learned more about Chinese history.
呼呼，打完不容易啊，帮帮忙找一下错的！
额…是高三的，有急用，速度阿！

Answer 1

When I was 12 years old, I went to Nanjing with two Canadians as their tour guide. They wanted to appreciate the beautiful secenery by boat,so we went to the Xuanwu Lake first. After that we went shopping, the sellers could not speak English, I tried my best to translate what they said, I was very happy that they bought some special crafts with my help. (这里你所写的little thing，我理解为小工艺品，不知道是否准确。) Then, we went to a small zoo and took some picutres. It was lunch time at that time, we had lunch together in a special restaurant, they are very satisfied with the food. After lunch we visited some old houses and learned mor about Chinese history. They thought I was a good tour guide, they really appreciated my help. I also had a happy day.That was a precious memory for me!
我给你修改了一下，希望能够帮到你！
我给你改得如此认真都没有被纳为满意答案，真伤心哪！！

Answer 2

Canadian---Canadians
First---Firstly
the by the boat---by boat(你有没有打错啦？）
buy---buying
seeing---saw
go shopping---went shopping
harder---easy
listen---listened
translate---translated
their ---my
but ---and
hungrily---hungry
house---houses

哇，不知道全部找出来了没有，你看看哈
打出来也很不容易呢