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书面表达（写一篇英语作文）

书面表达（写一篇英语作文）

为了更好地了解初中生使用零花钱的情况，我们在2000名学生中进行一次问卷调查。请根据下面的调查结果及建议写一篇短文。
条件如下
调查结果：1. 48%的学生用来买零食；2. 27%的学生用来买书；3. 17%的学生用来玩游戏和娱乐；4. 8%的学生用于其他。
合理使用零花钱的建议：1.少买零食，零食对身体无益；2.多买书，多读书；3.节约用钱。
注意：1.词数不少于80（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently，we did a survey on how student spend their pocket money among 2000 stuent …

Answer 1

Recently，we did a survey on how student spend their pocket money among 2000 students.
As we can see, about 48 percent of their pocket money is for junk food. 17 percents of it is use to play games for entertainment, and 8 percent of money are used to bought some other things. But only 27 percent of money are used for books.
We should eat less junk foods because they are not good for our health. More money should be used for books. Because that will benefit us a lot. Finally, we can't make money now, so we should save money.

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Answer 2

Make Good Use of Our Pocket Money
Different students use their pocket money in different ways.Recently，we did a survey on how students spend their pocket money among 2000 students.The results are as follow.Forty-eight percent of the students spend their pocket money on snacks.Twenty-seven percent on books.Seven percent on games and amusement.And eight percent on others.
As far as I am concerned,students should save their money and spend more on books and less on snacks,for as we know,snacks are bad for our health.

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