Question

求英文翻译！！急~~（请勿简单的机器翻译。）

以下是翻译内容：就在他临死之一瞬，没想到全身忽然发生了根本变化：他口里呼出的气，顿时变成了风和云；他呻吟之声，变成了隆隆作响的雷霆；他的左眼变成了太阳，右眼变成了月亮；手足和身躯，变成了大地和高山；血液变成江河；筋脉变成了道路，头发和胡须，也变成了天上的星星。
能不能把机器翻译的改通顺点？谢谢了。

Answer 1

Finally, at his death, some surprising changes occurred to him. The air he breathed out became wind and cloud. His moan became the the rumbling thunder. His left eye turned to the sun, while his eye became the moon. His body and limbs became the ground and mountains. His blood turned into rivers and his veins turned into roads.His beard and hair, turned into stars in the sky. 纯手工打制，希望楼主采纳咯~

Answer 2

这是维基里的一段翻译，顺序有点乱啊。
His breath became the wind; his voice the thunder; left eye the sun and right eye the moon; his body became the mountains and extremes of the world; his blood formed rivers; his muscles the fertile lands; his facial hair the stars and milky way; his fur the bushes and forests; his bones the valuable minerals; his bone marrows sacred diamonds; his sweat fell as rain; and the fleas on his fur carried by the wind became the fish and animals throughout the land.

Answer 3

At the split second of his death, Whole body suddendly changed. Gasping air went to wind and cloud,moaning into booms of thunder,left eye into Sun with right into moon, arms and legs to lands and mounts,blood to river and hair and beard into stars shinng in the night sky.

Answer 4

Things came out that his body changed at the last momen when he's die: his mouth breath changed into wind and cloud; his groan became the rumbbing thunder; his left eye turned to the sun and right turned to the moon; his limbs and body changed to earth and mountain; the blood to be rivers and veins to be roads; and even his hair and beard turned to stars in the sky.

Answer 5

He died in the moment, have never thought the whole body suddenly a fundamental change: his mouth breath, immediately into the wind and cloud; His voice of moaning, become the loudest thunder; His left eye into the sun, the moon into the right eye; Brothers and body, become the earth and mountains; The blood become river; Channels become road, the hair and beard, also became the stars in the sky.
望采纳谢谢

Answer 6

At the moment while he dead,there was an unexpected wonder happened in his body: The breath from his mouth became cloud and wind; The moan before death became strongly rumble of thunder; His left eye turned into the sun and right one turned into the moon; His hands, feet and body became the earth and mountains; His blood formed the rivers; The arteries and veins became the roads, the hair and beard turned into the shining stars in the sky.