Question

英语翻译，高手请进，

你提到的这些步骤我们已经实施，此外，“金封样品”已显示在报告里。

You mentioned these steps we have implemented,In addition, "gold seal samples" already displayed in the report.
是不是可以这样说，谢谢，求解。

Answer 1

不能，第一句语言习惯不对。另display 少了谓语。
We have implemented the steps what you mention. In additon, "Gold Seal Samples" are already displayed in the report.

Answer 2

These steps you mentioned have been ipemented by us, in addition the "gold seal samples" have been shown in the report.
像楼主的句子在英语里用被动态为好，显示用display不大好，因为报告是纸面的，所以建议用show。

Answer 3

前面一句的语序有问题，应该改成：We have implemented these steps you mentioned. 后面一句在displayed前加has been，变成被动。 精锐长宁天山中心英语组

Answer 4

ok的，前半句改成those steps you mention we had implemented更好，不过你的也看的懂

Answer 5

应该为：

We have conducted the steps which you metioned,in addition,"golden seal samples" have been presented in the report.