Question

英语改错题，麻烦大家帮帮忙。

1.No student could answer that question,even Yao,who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.
2.The Imformation Technology Revolution,made it possible through the introduction of computers in every field of human activity ,has completely altered our approach to life .

Answer 1

1 NO student could answer that question and..
2. The information technology revolution, which made it possible...这个地方应该还有错误，你看看打错没

追问

第一道我不是很懂耶，麻烦能不能讲详细点？谢谢啦！
第二道：我没打错，原题是这样。麻烦您啦！麻烦您啦

追答

两个句子不能用逗号隔开，中间要么是句号，要么有并列连词！

第二题如果有上下文的话，+个which就行了，但make it这个it要从上下文理解了！

Answer 2

1.No student could answer that question,even Yao,who is usually quick in answering questions was silent.
2.The Imformation Technology Revolution,made it possible through the introduction of computers in every field of human activity ,had completely altered our approach to life .