Question

求英语作文一篇，急！

假如你是上海市育英中学的学生李华，国庆期间去世博会参观后，你发现了一些健全人冒充残疾人使用轮椅或几个健全人推一个轮椅从绿色通道进入展馆等损害残疾人权益的不文明现象，请你就此现象给上海市市长写一封信反应情况，并提出你的建议。 建议信应包括以下要点。。 ①，加大检查力度，只有残疾人士且一把轮椅，只有在一个人的陪护的情况下方可从绿色通道进入展馆， ②，通过宣传以提高游客文明参观，尊重残疾人的意识。 注意：①词数：120词左右。 ②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ④参考词汇：绿色通道Green Channel 开头。。。 Dear Mayor, I am a student from Yu Ying Middle School of Shanghai. 结尾。。。 Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayor,
I am a student from Yu Ying Middle School of Shanghai. During the holiday in the National Day, I have been to the World Expo, but I had a notice that some people who are totally healthy pretend to be disabled people sitting on a wheelchair, or some healthy people push a wheelchair, who are through the green channel into the exhibition hall. This uncivilized phenomenon is damaged disability rights.So I decided to write a letter to you to present what I am thinking on the further improvement.
Firstly，I’d like to suggest that enhance the inspection. Only one disabled people who sitting on the wheelchair, can through the green channel into the exhibition hall,and absolutely under such circumstances that only one person keep company with. On the other hand, the visitors' quality, likewise, calls for further improvement. At the same time, we should pay more attention to the publicity which is about the respect for the disabled people. And, of course, to
reach the goal, we should make great efforts together.

Yours, Li Hua