英语短文改错!!!急!!!!

Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenwhile-------------------1thetelephonerang.Iwenttoanswer... One day,I was cooking in the kitchen while-------------------1the telephone rang.I went to answer immediatey.------------2It was my friend,Betty.When we were talked-----------------3on the phone,the fire alarm was sounded.I went-------------4back to the kitchen.The room full of smoke and--------------5the beef was badly burnt.I quick turned off the--------------6gas,opening all the windows,and then went out of-----------7the house.TO my surprised,two engines were outside-------8my house.I told the firemen that it was for my careless-----9cooking which caused the heavy smoke.--------------------10每一行都有错,如果没有错,就写正确回答时写的具体些例如:1、( )→( )或( )改为( )若要删除的词语就写成( )去掉若需要添加的词语就写成在( )和( )之间加上( ) 展开
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1 while -> when
2 answer immediately -> 之间加it
3 talked -> talking 进行时
4 was sounded -> sounded(不需被动)
5 full -> was full(否则没有谓语了)
6 quick -> quickly (用副词)
7 opening -> opened(用过去时,并列谓语)
8 surprised -> surprise (用名词)
9 for -> 去掉
10 which -> that (强调句式,it is . that..)
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1. while 改成when
2. answer后+it, immediately(估计是你打错的)
3. talked改成talking
4. 去掉was
5. the room后+was
6. quick改成quickly
7. opening改成opened
8. surprised改成surprise
9. 去掉for
10. which 改成that
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One day,I was cooking in the kitchen while-------------------1 while改成when
the telephone rang.I went to answer immediately.------------2 在answer和immediately间加上it
It was my friend,Betty.When we were talked-----------------3 talked改为talking
on the phone,the fire alarm was sounded.I went-------------4 was去掉
back to the kitchen.The room full of smoke and--------------5 在room和full间加上was
the beef was badly burnt.I quick turned off the--------------6 burnt改为burned,quick改成quickly
gas,opening all the windows,and then went out of-----------7 opening改为opened
the house.TO my surprised,two engines were outside-------8 surprised改为surprise
my house.I told the firemen that it was for my careless-----9 for去掉
cooking which caused the heavy smoke.--------------------10 which改为that
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