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改错learning is that difficult as you imagine.here's some advices for you.the first thing rememb...

改错learning is that difficult as you imagine.here's some advices for you.the first thing remember is that you must be willing to learn.it does not mean that you have to always like the subject.it does mean .therefor .that you must be willing to learn whatever are necessary.try to understand which it is must be willing to learn whatever are necessary.try to understand which it is important and how it will help you now and later .sometime a subject that you think is boring turns out to be attractive when you begin to work on them.learning things can be fun if you tried your best.make sure of you understand what you should learn before you start.when memorize things.find the main parts and then recite the whole thing.

Answer 1

learning is(not) that difficult as you imagine.here's some (advice) for you.the first thing (to)remember is that you must be willing to learn.it does not mean that you have to always like the subject . (however).that you must be willing to learn whatever （is） necessary.try to understand which (what)is important and how it will help you now and later .(sometimes) a subject that you think is boring turns out to be attractive when you begin to work on( it).learning things can be fun if you tried your best.make sure（ 去掉of ）you understand what you should learn before you start.when （memorizing）things.find the main parts and then recite the whole thing.

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Answer 2

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learning is that difficult as you imagine 改为learning is not as difficult as you imagine
here's some advices for you : here's some advice for you
the first thing(to) remember is that you must be willing to learn