Question

帮忙看看这篇英语文章有没语法错误

Long ago in a small, faraway village, there was a place known as the House of 1000 Mirrors. A small, happy little dog learned of this place and decided to visit. When he arrived, he hounced happily up the stairs to the doorway of the house. He looked through the doorway with his ears lifted high and his tail wagging as fast as it could. To his great surprise, he found himself staring at 1000 other happy little dogs with their tails wagging just as fast as his. He smiled a great smile, and was answered with 1000 great smiles just as warm and firendly. As he left the House, he thought to himself, "This is a wonderful place. I will come back and visit it often."

In this same village, another little dog, who was not quite as happy as the first one, decided to visit the house. He slowly climbed the stairs and hung his head low as he looked into the door. When he saw the 1000 unfriendly looking dogs staring back at him, he growled at them and was horrified to see 1000 little dogs growling back at him. As he left, he thought to himself, "That is a horrible place, and I will never go back there again."
All the faces in the world are mirrors. What kind of reflections do you see in the faces of the people you meet?
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Answer 1

很久以前，在一个小的，遥远的村庄里，有一个地方叫做1000面镜子的房子。一个小的，非常快乐的小狗听说了这个地方并决定去参观。当他到达时，他愉快地爬上楼梯的房子的门。他透过门口与他的耳朵和尾巴摇高举尽可能快的速度。使他大为吃惊的是，他发现自己盯着1000只快乐的小狗摇着尾巴一样快。他微笑着巨大的微笑，并回答了1000个大的笑容一样温暖，友好的。当他离开家时，他对自己说，“这是一个奇妙的地方。我一定要经常来参观。”在这个村里，另一只小狗，谁是不太快乐第一，决定去看房子。他慢慢地爬上楼梯，低着头看着门。当他看到1000只小狗不友好地盯着他，他咆哮着，并在他们感到震惊地看到1000小狗咆哮回他。当他离开，他想，“这是一个可怕的地方，和我将永远不会再回到那里。”世界上所有的脸都是镜子。什么样的思考，你看见的人的脸就是什么样的。

Answer 2

很久以前，在一个小的，遥远的村庄里，有一个叫做1000面镜子的房子的地方。一个小的，非常快乐的小狗听说了这个地方并决定去参观。当它到达时，它愉快地爬上楼梯到房子的门口。它透过门口向里面望去，同时它竖起自己耳朵和尾巴也快速的摇摆着。使它大为吃惊的是，它发现自己盯着1000只快乐的小狗，它们也飞快的摇着尾巴。它大笑，1000个小狗同样也同样回以温暖，友好的微笑。当它离开这个房子时，它对自己说，“这是一个奇妙的地方。我一定要经常来参观。”在这个村里，另一只小狗，它不像第一只狗那样快乐，决定去看房子。它慢慢地爬上楼梯，低着头朝门里望去。当它看到1000只小狗不友好地盯着它，它咆哮着，震惊地看到1000小狗也同样朝它咆哮。当它离开，它想，“这是一个可怕的地方，我将永远不会再回到那里。”世界上所有的脸都是镜子。你所看到的每张脸也同样反映了你自己。你遇的人是给你怎样的回想呢？

Answer 3

您这哪儿寻摸来的一段寓言故事，怎能有语法错误？

Answer 4

建议：
1. 第二行的visit 后面加it.
2：倒数第二段最后一句改为："This is a horrible place, i'll never come back here again"