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简单的英语对话问题（帮我翻译一下）

大家好，我是李璨婷，很高兴能在此与大家见面，今天，我们就来谈谈节约粮食的问题。在日常生活中，随处可以见到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到 自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么，也许你仍然以为我们 的祖国地大物博。然而事实是：我国人口己超过12.5亿，每年的净增长是1200万人；人均耕地面积1.2亩，是世界人均值的1／4；目前耕地面积正 以每年30多万亩的速度递；全国40％的城市人口消耗的粮食依靠进口。 从1981－1995年间，全国共减少了耕地8100万亩，每年因此而减少粮 食生产500亿斤。而且现在这个减少速度仍然在不断加快。乱占耕地、挖沙、土地质量下降、荒漠化等种种现象在蚕食着耕地。现 实绝对不容乐观！！节约粮食，是我们每个公民应尽的义务，而不是说你的生活好了，你浪费得起就可以浪费。浪费 是一种可耻的行为。只要存有节约的意识，其实做起来很简单：吃饭时吃 多少盛多少，不扔剩饭菜；在餐馆用餐时点菜要适量，而不应该摆阔气， 乱点一气。吃不完的饭菜打包带回家。尽量减少对生态环境的压力已经成 为一种新时尚，成为新时代人应该具备的一种品质。

Answer 1

我对你的文章有些建议, 不介意我有些改动吧?
''大家好，我是李璨婷，很高兴能在此与大家见面，今天，我们就来谈谈节约粮食的问题。在日常生活中，随处可以见到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到 自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么，也许你仍然以为我们 的祖国地大物博。然而事实是：我国人口己超过12.5亿，每年的净增长是1200万人；人均耕地面积1.2亩，是世界人均值的1／4；乱占耕地、挖沙、土地质量下降、荒漠化等种种现象在蚕食着耕地。从1981－1995年间，全国共减少了耕地8100万亩，目前耕地面积正以每年30多万亩的速度递；每年因此而减少粮食生产500亿斤。而且现在这个减少速度仍然在不断加快。全国40％的城市人口消耗的粮食依靠进口。现实绝对不容乐观！！节约粮食，是我们每个公民应尽的义务。浪费是一种可耻的行为，而不是说你的生活好了，你浪费得起就可以浪费。只要存有节约的意识，其实做起来很简单：吃饭时吃 多少盛多少，不扔剩饭菜；在餐馆用餐时点菜要适量，而不应该摆阔气， 乱点一气。吃不完的饭菜打包带回家。尽量减少对生态环境的压力已经成 为一种新时尚，成为新时代人应该具备的一种品质。''
Good morning/afternoon/evening, I'm lee chang ting. Today we are going to talk about saving grain. In our daily life, we can find that there're many people are wasting food. Perhaps you haven't realized you are wasting food, perhaps you think that is not a big deal, perhaps you still think that there're many natural resources we can use.
But in reality, the population in China is more than one billion two hundred and fifty million, and the annual net growth is around twelve million. Per capita plow land in China is 1.2 acreages; it just is the quarter of per plow land in the world. Wrong application of plow land, sand digging, decline in the quality of plow land and desertification. Those are the factors to damage plow land. From 1981 to 1995, there are totally eighty one million acreages of plow land disappeared. Currently, the amount of plow land decreases thirty acreages every year. Because of that, the grain yield reduces two hundred and fifty kilograms every year. And this situation is intensifying now. All over the country, forty percent of people who lives in urban area rely on import food. It is the truth who must not ignore!!
Saving grain is our obligation. Wasting food is a disgraceful behavior, is not because you want so you do it. We can save grain naturally if we have the awareness. When we are dining, we shouldn’t take extra food if we don’t need it. When we are eating out, we should only order the food what we need, but not for showing off. And the leaving food should be packaged up and taken back home. Environmentally-friendly lifestyle is being a trend, and being environmentally conscious is the essential element the new generation does have.
我想问一问你系唔系要口头汇报, 如果是的话, 呢都有d嘢可以加落去.
1)…1.2 acreages… > 读 one point two acreages
2)(年份)…1981 to 1995 > 读 one nine eight one to one nine nine five
3)最後读完可以加 this is the end of my sharing/presentation.
我自己翻译时系用present tense 呢个时态, 有没有问题?
如果你仲有咩问题可以再问我.希望可以帮到你.

Answer 2

Everybody is good, I'm li on the ladies, very glad to be here with you all again, today, we will talk about the problem of saving food. In daily life, everywhere can see waste of food. You may not realize himself in the waste, you might think you waste this little nothing, perhaps you still think that our country is humongous. But the fact of the matter is that China's population has more than 1.25 billion, the annual net growth is 12 million people; The land area of 1.2 acres, is the world's per capita value of the quarter; Currently cultivated land area is more than 30 each year ten thousand acres of speed pass; 40% of the country's urban population consume food rely on imports. From 1981-1995, the national total reduced the cultivated land 81 million mu, thus reducing food each year food production 50 billion catties. And now this reduce speed ?