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On Christmas Eve,my parents and I go to the supermarket near my home to buy some food.On the way back home,I saw several teens of my ages wandering aimlessly around the square.They were shaking with cold but looked as if they were extreme hungry.It was such a cold night Ifelt sorry for us.I remembered the food we had been bought and gave it to them.Then we walked home silently.I felt happy to be able to give others hand.My parents also felt very proud at me.They said we should do more things to help people whom are in diffculty.

Answer 1

On Christmas Eve,my parents and I （went） to the supermarket near my home to buy some food.On the way back home,I saw several teens of my (age) wandering aimlessly around the square.They were shaking with cold (and) looked as if they were (extremely) hungry.It was such a cold night (that) I felt sorry for (them).I remembered the food we had (去掉been) bought and gave it to them.Then we walked home silently.I felt happy to be able to give others （a）hand.My parents also felt very proud (of) me.They said we should do more things to help people (who) are in diffculty.

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Answer 2

On Christmas Eve,my parents and I went to the supermarket near my home to buy some food.On the way back home,I saw several teenagers of my age wandering aimlessly around the square.They were shaking with cold but looked as if they were extremely hungry.It was such a cold night I felt sorry for them.I remembered the food we had bought and gave it to them.Then we walked home silently.I felt happy to be able to give others a hand.My parents also felt very proud of me.They said we should do more things to help people who were in diffculty.

Answer 3

I felt sorry for them.I remembered the food we had bought and gave it to them.Then we walked home silently.I felt happy to be able to give others a hand.My parents also felt very proud of me.They said we should do more things to help people who are in diffculty.