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急急急！！！英语菜鸟求助！！！谢谢谢！！！

上边留了篇英语作文，好不容易写出来了，但肯定错误不少，麻烦各位给看看吧！！！有什么拼写和语法错误麻烦给改一改，摆脱了！！！

We should make efforts to master English,because study English is go with the current of the times and we often need English to exchange.But we always find that we pay the time but haven't a maked effect.So we need the ways to improve English.
According to my personal understanding,I think that we should remember a wealth of words,because English are always based on word.When we master a lot of words,we can listing and speaking English.
Of course ,learn English not only remember word but also speak English as more as possible.To master a language you need much practice.So we should often exchange in English.It is good for improve in our English.
Besides this,we can listen or sing English song、see film and so on.Through them you will interested in English.
In a word,through remember word and much practice can help us to study English.Of course,learning English need own hard.For these way you might as well have a try.

可能错误有不少，麻烦各位高手给看看了！

Answer 1

we should learn english because studying english is the trend nowadays and we need it to communicate with others. but the time we spent on the study usually doesn't earn the effects.so we need to find proper ways to learn it.
in my opinion, we should firstly have enough vocabulary, because all languages are based on a wild range of vocabulary.
of course, learning english is by not only remembering the words but also speaking it frequently. speaking is essential for practicing.so we should try to take any chance to communicate with others in english in order to prove our english.
besides, we can develop our interests in english by listening to the english songs,seeing films,etc.

改了一下，貌似改了满多
有些我不理解你的意思的就直接跳过了（比如结尾，我不大懂）
自己英文也没有很好，希望有帮助吧