Question

托福口语第一题 麻烦大家帮我看看如果说成这样大概能拿多少分，谢谢了！我只有5分，谢谢了

Personally, I would have to say that my favorite animal is giant panda. There are several reasons I need to name. First, panda is native to my motherland—China and is the national treasure of my country. Its black and white fur coat makes it quite unique in the world.
Also, pandas are so cute, they are eating bamboo, climbing trees and playing games to pass time. When I first saw a panda in a zoo, it was playing with a ball and often walked towards the window. It seemed to greet me. I was so excited that I fell in love with this lovely animal from that time. You know, a famous Halloween film named kungfu panda depicts this lovely and smart animal.
In addition, panda is an endangered species. We should take good care of pandas indeed. Reasons above are why I love panda most.

Answer 1

fair左右
开场白啰嗦，而且总字数你大概是说不完的
不建议使用逻辑连接词，原因直接用first,second
用词僵化不像是口语而像是写作
第一个原因展开不充分，还不如不说，建议你润色下和第三个原因合一下

Answer 2

说的清楚且流畅 第一题就会满分

Answer 3

你说成怎样了？- -

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