Question

急！！！谁能帮我翻译一下我的出国留学个人陈述，别有语法错误，专业点，在线等！！！！！高悬赏！！谢！

早在两年前我就有出国学习的打算，幸运的是我所学习的专业国际商务正好有这个机会，我之所以想到英国学习是因为英国的文化很吸引我，并且在学术方面有很高的成就，教育方式同中国比也更自主，更有利于提高自主学习的能力。
我知道Anglia Ruskin University有很悠久的历史，学校的教学系统很优秀，条件很优越，还有来自世界各地的学生，我很愿意与他们成为朋友，这些都是吸引我的因素。
我选择学习国际商务是因为商务是永恒不变的国际话题，就业会有更多的机会，毕业之后我希望得到大公司的工作机会好好展示在学校学习到的知识。
我本身是个性格开朗，爱交朋友的人，平时喜欢读书画画听音乐，也会弹钢琴，很希望能在Anglia Ruskin University培养更多的兴趣
（翻译字数大概在500字之内，是那个意思就可以了，主要是别有语法错误，用词也不用特别高深，本人语法不太好，就麻烦大家了，在线等！！高悬赏！！）

Answer 1

As early as two years ago, I already had the intention to study abroad but to no avail. Fortunately international business, which is the major I studied, gives me the opportunity right now. Why I am interested in studying in Britain is that I am overwhelmingly attracted by British culture. Particularly in academic aspect it has reached a very high level. Its education mode is also more autonomous than Chinese, hence more conducive to improving the ability of self-learning.
I know Anglia Ruskin University has a long history. It boasts an excellent teaching system and extremely superior conditions, with students from all over the world whom I would love to befriend. All these are the factors which intrigue me.
I determined to study international business because business is a constant subject for international community, which provides more employment opportunities. Hopefully after graduation I will be able to work in a big company to well exert what I have learned at school.
I myself is an outgoing, cheerful person who loves to make friends. In my spare time I like listening to music, reading, painting and occassionally playing the piano. I am looking forward to developing more interest at Anglia Ruskin University.
【向雷锋同志学习，把有限的生命投入到无限的为人民服务中去！】

Answer 2

自己做吧! 老想着抄,难道去英国作业也抄吗?! 那极可能不能 毕业哦!

Answer 3

Two years ago I would want to go to, fortunately I study international business have the opportunity, I think English is because the British culture attracts me very much, and in the academic aspects of high achievement, education way with China than the more independent, more conducive to the enhancement of independent learning ability.I know that Anglia Ruskin University has a very long history, the school teaching system is very outstanding, conditions are very superior, and students from all over the world, I am willing to become friends with them, these are the factors that attract me.I choose to learn international business is because business is the eternal topic of the international, will have more chances of employment, after graduation I hope to get a corporate job opportunity to display in school to learn knowledge.I am a cheerful personality, love to make friends, I like reading painting listen to music, and piano, very much hope in the Anglia Ruskin University culture more interest

亲把分给我吧！！！！

Answer 4

眼花。。

Answer 5

Two years ago I would want to go to, fortunately I study international business have the opportunity, I think English is because the British culture attracts me very much, and in the academic aspects of high achievement, education way with China than the more independent, more conducive to the enhancement of independent learning ability.I know that Anglia Ruskin University has a very long history, the school teaching system is very outstanding, conditions are very superior, and students from all over the world, I am willing to become friends with them, these are the factors that attract me.I choose to learn international business is because business is the eternal topic of the international, will have more chances of employment, after graduation I hope to get a corporate job opportunity to display in school to learn knowledge.I am a cheerful personality, love to make friends, I like reading painting listen to music, and piano, very much hope in the Anglia Ruskin University culture more interest

Answer 6

好简单的一份个人陈述！“你有什么能力去完成你要申请的课程？”这个非常重要的一点没有陈述！