Question

烦请帮忙翻译一下，这是我考研复试需要准备的英文介绍。请在原文的基础上补全句子，并检查我的语法错误。

1、自我介绍
Good morning, my dear professors and teachers. I ’m glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is lzy,26. I come from chifeng, a city of inter Mongolia. I graduated from dalian nationality university.major in financial management. I worked in students’ union in my school time,做了一年学生会主席，期间，我努力地为大家服务，搭建起学校和学生的桥梁。
2009,after graduation, I back to my hometown and worked in State Taxation Bureau in chifeng，虽然工作很忙，但我认为我的工作很有价值，让我理解了税收是取之于民用之于民的。我工作了两年，感受到自己的理论知识不足，所以想到大学中深造一下。
So I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I have been working.虽然准备的过程很辛苦，但庆幸的事，I can stand here today and have chance to be a member of Xiamen university which is 我梦想的大学。
And then, talk to my characters and hobby. I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of 摄影。In my spare time，我喜欢到大自然中，记录下大自然中美丽的景色,the sky, the sea,the mountan(山),the bird, the animals and the people, whatever 我认为美丽的东西 。如果你也喜欢摄影，我们可以结伴同行。
At last，I wanna say 我很希望到厦门大学读书，if I am given a chance to study here, I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.3q!
2、研究生期间你的计划。
Firstly，深入研究税收学课程
Secondly，将税收理论知识应用于具体的税收工作中
Thirdly，通过两年的学习，能够有能力写出一篇对税收体系有实践意义的学术论文

Answer 1

I had been the chairman of Students' Union for one year. During that period, I worked hard to serve people, and built the bridge between studens and university.
Though the work was busy, I found it rather worthy for it made me understand that the revenue is from people and for people. After working for 2years, I felt a lack of theoretical knowledge, therefore I would like to have a further study in university.
Though the process was arduous, fortunately,
my ideal university
taking photos
I love to be in the open air and record the beautiful scenery of the nature.
I consider to be beautiful
If you like taking photos too, we could go in company.
I look forward to studying in Xiamen University.
your plan during the post-graduate study
deepen my research of taxation
apply the theoretical knowledge of taxation to the practical work
be able to write a practical research paper on taxation system after 2years' study