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一篇初三的英语作文，帮忙看看

Answer 1

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问题描述:

Now we are young student and we should study hard to be a useful person in the society. I think we should learn every subject well, because the basic is very important for us. We should also exercise every day so as to keep our body healthy. Don’t be late for school and obey all the rules in school ----it’s good for us to keep good habits. And we should do the homework every day. To be polite and friendly to other people is necessary for a good student, too. I think parents should allow us to do the things by ourselves and we shouldn’t be allowed to drive, it’s too dangerous. Studying hard and being friendly to other people, you will be a successful man in the future.

看看有没有什么语法错误，能改的话略微改动一些也可以。

谢谢了，要快！20分钟内

解析:

Now we are young （student，最好省去，要用也是复数。） and we should study hard to be（bee更好） a useful person （in the society，最好用to society对社会有用的人。）. I think we should learn every subject well, because the basic is very important for us. We should also exercise every day so as to keep （our body ，用keep healthy就可以）healthy. Don’t be late for school and obey all the rules in school ----it’s good for us to keep good habits. And we should do （the 省略）homework every day. To be polite and friendly to other people is necessary for a good student, too. I think parents should allow us to do the things by ourselves and we shouldn’t be allowed to drive, （加because，或as等表示原因的，否则和前面的句子没有连词）it’s too dangerous. Studying hard and being friendly to other people, you will be a successful man in the future.

初三的，写的挺好！努力吧！