Question

英语短文改错

it was my 18th birthday yesterday,as the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthdayparty for me at home. with my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, i really had unforgettable experience, we sang songs, dancing and played games together. we all enjoy ourselves very much, during the party, my parent told me that from then on i was no longer a child and an adult, they also said i should be more independent and responsibly, hearing their words, i was greatly encouraged, it was just at that moment when i felt i was a grown-up

Answer 1

It was my 18th's birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, my parents held a birthday party for me at home. Some of my good friends and my parents attended my birthday party. I really had an unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parents told me that i was no longer a child but an adult from then on, they also said i should be more independent and responsible, hearing their words. I was greatly encouraged. It was just at that moment when i feeling i was a grown-up.

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Answer 2

it was my 18th birthday yesterday,as the age is special for US teenagers, so(去掉so) my parents held a birthdayparty for me at home. with my parents and some of my good friends attendING my birthday party, i really had AN unforgettable experience, we sang songs, dancED and played games together. we all enjoyED ourselves very much, AT the party, my parent told me that from then on i WOULD no longer BE a child BUT an adult, they also said i should be more independent and responsiblE, hearing their words, i was greatly encouraged, it was just at that moment THAT i felt i was a grown-up.

Answer 3

第一行中，将逗号后面的“so”去掉，第二行中，把“attend”改成“attended”，因为时态要和前面保持一致为过去式。第三行，将“dancing”改成“danced”。第四行“enjoy”加“-ed”第五行将连词“and”变为“but”，同行中“responsibly”改为形容词“responsible”。最后一行中的“when”改为“that”，为强调句型。