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高分请高手帮我翻译一下--考研英语复试自我介绍

各位老师好

很荣幸参加贵校的面试
我叫xxx

我的家乡是山东烟台的
一个美丽的海岛-长岛

欢迎到我家做客

我2010年毕业于山东建筑大学的土木工程本科

已经工作两年

目前在北京的一家甲级设计院从事结构设计工作

在设计院的工作经验对我非常宝贵
其间我参与了框架结构和剪力墙结构的设计
对这两种结构有了进一步的理解
结构设计的工作能学到很多东西

但是工作很忙

考研复习时间很少

所以考试成绩一般

工作中我发现我的专业理论知识还需要提高

而且我对与钢筋混凝土结构相关的学习和科研有着浓厚的兴趣
所以我非常希望能到贵校继续学习深造
如果有幸能被录取
研究生期间我会努力学习专业知识
利用课余时间争取早日考取结构工程师证书
并积极参与导师的科研实验工作
认真完成导师布置的科研任务
在实验中进一步加深对钢筋混凝土结构的理解
非常感谢

以上是我自己中文的自我介绍，如果觉得有什么需要补充和改进的请大家帮忙改进。请高手帮我翻译下，不要那些汉译英工具翻译的，要那翻译我就不用在这提问了，我还是能分辨是自己写的还是用电脑翻译的。
翻译的好的一定再额外奖励分数！考研对我很重要，请大家认真对待，多谢！！！！！！

Answer 1

Good morning/afternoon根据时间自己改 every teacher
I pleasure to come here to have the interview
My name is XXX
I come from Shandong province and my hometown is Chang Dao where is a beautiful isle located in Yan Tai
welcome to my home
I have been working for 2 years,at present I am working in a Beijing's design institute ranked A level and I mainly undertake the structural design work.
The experience that I worked in the institute is really valuable.at that time,I took part in the design of framework structure and shear wall's structure.I had a further progress in th work and became learned.
But the more work,the less time to review.so my mark is not very well.
Despite of this,I'm interested in the study related to Reinforced Concrete constructrue.
so I reaaly want to study in the XXX(学校名)
If I would be accepted,I'll do my best to obtain the constructure engineer certificate soon,take in the scientific researchs and accomplish them.
Thank you very much.
自己润了下色，把一些对你不利的话去掉了。如果你口语好的话你的老师估计听不懂…
希望我的回答对你有帮助

Answer 2

You are goodVery honored to participate in the interviewMy name is XXXMy hometown is in Shandong YantaiA beautiful island - Long IslandWelcome to my homeI graduated from Shandong Jianzhu University in 2010civil engineering undergraduate courseHave been working for two yearsCurrently in Beijing, a Class-A design institute is engaged in design workIn the design of work experience on my very valuableI was involved in frame structure and shear wall structure designOn the two structure has been further understandingStructure design work can learn a lot of thingsBut the work is very busyWith little time to reviewSo the test scores in generalWork I found my professional knowledge but also need to improveAnd I on and reinforced concrete structures related to learning and research has a strong interest inSo I very much hope to go to your school to studyIf I can be admittedDuring graduate study I will strive to learn professional knowledgeThe use of spare time to get a structure engineer certificateAnd actively participate in her research experimentComplete tutorial layout research taskIn the experiments to further deepen the understanding of reinforced concrete structureThanks a lot

Answer 3

money comes first