Question

这句话有语法错误吗

For one who is always drifting on a strange road, passing by strange scenery and listening to strange music,then one day, he'll find things he ever tried so hard to erase , are, already gone...
就是在'for one.... he'll .." 这个地方衔接有没有什么问题?
If you can kindly polish this sentence to a better expression, plz go ahead :) thx

Answer 1

有错误，For one who is always drifting on a strange road, passing by strange scenery and listening to strange music，只有一个主语+定语从句，读起来感觉都不对。he'll find things he ever tried so hard to erase , are, already gone...are错误，应该用非限制行定语从句补充说明things的内容。不介意的话，我来给些辅助建议，修改下原文，With strange sceneries flying
into my eyes ，I drifted （Vt，是我自己游荡在陌生的路上，drift myself ......）myself on the strange road and listened to strange music each time。suddendly，one day，I find things I ever have tried（Vt：及物动词，在这里意思是考验,磨炼;折磨,使苦恼eg：This will try your courage.
这对你的勇气将是一个考验。）hard to erase，which are already gone with the wind。
希望能帮助你解决疑问。呵呵。

追问

谢谢你的回答和建议.＾＾　不过有些问题想探讨一下．1．he'll find things he ever tried so hard to erase , are, already gone.are 并无错误,只是换一种结构吧:he'll find that things (he ever tried so hard to erase) are already gone. 2.drift一般都是用作不及物动词,并无drift oneself的用法. 3.至于那个try your courage的用法,以前还真没注意到过.谢谢 :)

追答

呵呵，很高兴和你探讨，对不起，确实是我说错了，he'll find that things (he ever tried so hard to erase) are already gone，这种结构是对的，但是我看着很不舒服，觉得句子太冗长，英语说的不地道，查牛津高阶字典，字典里的解释是确实如你所说，drift通常为Vi，也没有drift oneself的说法，非常感谢你让我认识到自己的错误，我还得再得再加油学好英语了。呵呵。

Answer 2

当如此修改：
For one who is always drifting on a strange road, passing by strange scenery and listening to strange music, he'll one day find things he ever tried so hard to erase are already gone...

Answer 3

没有什么问题，for one 可以看成一个介词短语，eg , because of you who ......., 然后后面的就是主句了。

Answer 4

For one who is always drifting on a strange road, passing by strange scenery and listening to strange music，只有一个主语+定语从句，读起来感觉都不对

Answer 5

有错 For one...缺了主句