Question

请帮我修改一下以下翻译内容！谢谢！

我们学校从旧址迁到新址后，设备都是全新的。这个图书馆是我们新校的亮点之一。这个图书馆很大，整个楼层都是供师生阅读的场地，是按照江苏省一级图书馆的标准进的行设计的。在这个图书馆里，充分体现了师生平等，打破了设计理念。传统的图书馆一般都会把教师阅览室与学生阅览室分开。教师的图书馆我们是无法进入的。但现在就不同了，无论是教师还是学生，都在这里阅读。所有的书都集中在这里，我们可以自由翻阅，还可以借书。这儿的书按类别分类，方便查找，也方便管理。图书馆里还有两个现代化的教室，一个是文学欣赏教室，一个是电子阅览教室。电子阅览教室是很先进的，有许多台电脑，网速也很快。我们的老师希望我们多阅读来拓宽我们的知识面。
Our school move from old place to here and all the equipments are new. This library is one of oue school’s bright spots. This library is very big , the whole floor is for teachers and studebts to read. It is designed according to the criterion of Jiangsu province. In this library , it fully enbodies the equality between teachers and students and breaks the triditional concept. Triditional libraries always parts teacher’s reading room and student’s reading room. Students cannot go into teacher’s reading room. But now , it’s different. No matter you are a student or a teacher,we read books at the same place. All kinds of booksare put together here and we can read them freely. If a book cannot be finished reading ,it can also be borrowed. The books by category, convenience, is convenient for management. The library has two modern classrooms, one is the literature appreciation classroom, one is the electronic reading room. Electronic reading room is very advanced, there are many computers, speed very quickly. Our teacher wants us to read more to expand our knowledge.
满意回答追加50悬赏！

Answer 1

没啥时间，就改一句好了，呵呵，
第一句：after our school relocated from the old place to the new one here, equipment is brand new.第二行有个错单词，studebts---students
其实看着问题不大，就是直译了点，相信你再修饰一下就会好很多；

Answer 2

。。。。。。。。。。。。好多错错，改不过来

Answer 3

改不过来