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Nowadays, it is much more convenient for us to go out that we can make a choice on the routes or modes of transport, for example, taking mini bus to home is a right way to let you get off at the gate of your building, and you may go somewhere far away from home by train. However, so many transportations also bring us a lot of troubles, like traffic jams and accidents. The former one just causes us to be late for work or other urgent things. But the latter one may bring us pains of hurt and the sadness of losing our friends or family members. As more and more traffic accidents happened everyday, the number of people killed in the accidents is increasing, which is so serious to the government. Therefore they should try to make some measures to reduce terrible accidents so that to protect the safety of the public.Notice that drivers hold the lives of all the passengers, so they must pay more attention to the ways and rules of driving. First of all, it is wrong to follow too close to the other vehicles，which makes them can not see the front clearly. Therefore drivers should keep a 3-second following distance from the car in front of them, except in hazardous weather conditions where they should maintain a 4- or 5-car following distance, so that if the bus in front slow down or stop immediately, the driver of the following bus can have enough time to stop or take a reaction to deal with this urgent situation. Next is not to change the improper lanes as will, or turn to other lanes by force. So the right way is that drivers should plan to choose the route before, after which they try not to change the lanes unnecessarily，but keep the proposed the route all the time except meeting emergency. Furthermore, if it is necessary to change lines for drivers, they should turn to shoulder check, in order to ensure the safety before taking action. By the way, they also should turn on the light to let the followers know that whether they turn right or left, so that to let others have enough time to take a reaction. Thirdly，the drivers mustn’t make a U-turn illegally. Before turning round, they should watch the rearview mirrors to check there is nobody nearby. If there is anything doubt, the diver should get off to make sure whether to turn or not. Furthermore, some blind or deaf people, who can not see the light or hear the hocking of horns, may be knocked down by carelessness. Therefore, before turning around, drivers must take into account the safety of users in other lanes. Finally, a long time to drive may make them feel tired or sleepy, which is also a hidden danger for accident. When drivers feel tired, they should have enough time to take a rest, in order to maintain in healthy mental condition. In addition, they mustn’t take a drunken driving, as you know, alcohol is a normal killer to traffic death.

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