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Last summer vacatious , I went to Zhengzhou to visit my uncle . I went to the Yellow River with my cousin and we spent a whole day there . We ride horses , took a steamboat ride , enjoyed a big fish meal . We had a much good time that day . When we got back , it was already dark . We decided the next day to climbing the Happiness Tower , which is said to be the tallest all over the Asia . However , on my way there , it began to rain all of a sudden . As we had not umbrellas , we got wet all over . both of us got a high fever and was sent to hospital . After we took some medicine , we recovered soon .

Answer 1

1. vacation ,单复数错误
2.the whole day whole 一般与the 联用。
3.rode 时态错误
4.and enjoyed a big fish meal 句子有多个谓语动词必须有一个连词
5. much 改very 或者去掉a
6 climbe decide to d o
7on our way there
8 we had no umbrellas
9　al of us 有多个人

Answer 2

I went to Zhengzhou to visit my uncle in my last summer vacation. I went to the Yellow River with my cousin and we spent a whole day there. We rode horses, taking a steamboat ride and enjoyed a big fish meal. We had a very good(wonderful) time that day. When we got back that was already dark. We decided to climb the Happiness Tower the next day, which is said to be Asia's tallest. However, on our way to there, it began to rain all of a sudden. As we didn't have umbrellas, which we got wet all over. Both of us got a high fever and was sent to hospital. After we had taken some medicine,and we had recovered quickly.

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Answer 3

Last summer vacation,I went to Zhengzhou to visit my uncle.I went to the yellow river with my cousin and we spent a whole day there.We rode horses,took a steamboat and enjoyed a big fish meal.We had much good time that day.When we got back,it was really dark.We decided to climb the Happiness Tower the next day,which is said to be the tallest all over the Asia.However,on my way there,it began to rain all of a sudden.We got all wet as we did not have umbrellas.Both of us got a high fever and were sent to the hospital.After we had taken some medicine,we recoverd soon.

Answer 4

Last summer vacatious , I went to Zhengzhou to visit my uncle . I went to the Yellow River with my cousin and we spent a whole day there . We ride horses , took a steamboat ride , enjoyed a big fish meal . We had a much good time that day . When we got back , it was already dark . We decided the next day to climbing the Happiness Tower , which is said to be the tallest all over the Asia . However , on my way there , it began to rain all of a sudden . As we had not umbrellas , we got wet all over . both of us got a high fever and was sent to hospital . After we took some medicine , we recovered soon .