Question

英语作文的问题，我最近在学习英语，写了作文 不知道找谁改，请各位好心人帮帮忙。5月份要考试了。

Advertisments
Advertisements are getting their way into people’s lives.for example:it always insert advertisments some minutes,when we watch Tv.Sometimes it upsets to me.when we walk outside,the advertisements are arounded us.In a word:advertisement not anywhere.
Does the advertisements is ture?in fact,ti is notover true.we not really always belive ourself eyes to see,bu also know and research it.I belive that a good products don,t need expressly advertising.It been known ,in doesn’t dvertise situation.
But a few people can do ti,they always believe advertisments said.Blind following and spend much mony for it,that leads to heavy loads for life.
In oen’s all life has much somethings can pursue, keep the enthusiasm for life.Let’s go together.
跪求好心人 帮帮忙

Answer 1

dvertise,notover这两个单词是不是写错了.作文有一些要改的,但是写的还好. 你自己看一下有没有要改的,下面是翻译:
广告

广告越来越成为人们最的例子：它总是插入广告几分钟，当我们看电视，有时它会。当我们走在外面，广告都是围绕我们。一句话：没有任何广告。

做广告是真的吗？事实上，我是不相信自己notover我们眼睛看到的，但也知道和研究它。我相信一个好的产品，不需要明确的广告。这是众所周知的，在不dvertise情况。

但很少有人能做的，他们总是相信广告说。跟着瞎花更多的钱，导致重负荷的生活。

在对的生活多一些可以追求，保持对生活的热情。让我们一起走

追问

恩恩 应该是advertise 和 not all

追答

成功改错了

Answer 2

不是英文，是英文的堆砌。建议阅读至少10篇真正英文的有关advertisements的文章，且不能一遍阅读一遍思考中文，要直接用英文读懂，之后再谈写作！因为，用中文思维是写不明白英文的。还可以这样考虑，只会汉语，后学英语，只有2个语言，那么，能出来的，就是说出来写出来的，要么是汉语，要么是英语，要么，不客气地说，不是人语！这不针对楼主，只是说明道理！

追问

我知道，但我的英文水平太差了。这是考试卷子上的题目，我就想通过多写 来提高我的写作水平。只要句子的语法和用法对，让改卷子老师能给我分就行。希望能得到你的帮助。

追答

多思，不是多写。希望你成功。

Answer 3

Advertisments
Advertisements are getting their ways into people’s life,for example,advertisments are always inserted for some minuteswhen we watch Tv.Sometimes it upsets me.When we walk outside,the advertisements are around us.In a word,advertisement are everywhere.
Is the advertisement ture?In fact,it is not alwaystrue.we do not really always believe our own eyes to see,but also know and research it.I belive that a good product doesn',t need advertising.It has been known ,it doesn’t change situation.
But few people can do it ,they always believe what advertisments say.Blind following and spending much mony for it lead to heavy loads for life.
In all life,everyone has some things to pursue. keep the enthusiasm for life.Let’s go together.