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i am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before 。i have been thinking ...

i am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before 。i have been thinking about the question you ask me。on my opionion ，you should come back after finished your studies abroad。for one reason ，that you are studing is badly needed nowadays in our country。it will be quite easily for you to find a good job。in fact，i know a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you。for another reason。i think it will be too much more convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old。but this is only my point。it is up to you make a right choice。短文改错

Answer 1

i am very glad to receive the letter you sent me two weeks ago 。i have been thinking about the question you asked me。in my opionion ，you should come back after finished your studies abroad。for one reason ，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country。it will be quite easy for you to find a good job。in fact，i know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you。for another reason。i think it will be much more convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old。but this is only my point。it is up to you to make a right choice

Answer 2

have received改为receive before改ago ask改asked on改in
finishied改finishing that改what easily改easy company改companies
too去掉 you和make中间加to
不明白再问我哦~

Answer 3

I am very glad to receive the letter you sent me two weeks ago 。I have been thinking about the question you asked me。In my opionion ，you should come back after finished your studies abroad。For one reason ，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country。It will be quite easy for you to find a good job。In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you。For another reason。I think it will be much more convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old。But this is only my point。it is up to you to make a right choice.
好了

Answer 4

除了 for me 改成for you外，其余基本赞同小怪兽的答案