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LastSaturday,thestudentsofourclassmadeabiketraptoasmalltownbytheTaihuLake,wesetoffear...
Last Saturday ,the students of our class made a bike trap to a small town by the Taihu Lake,we set off earlier in the morning,After getting to the town ,we had visited some places of interset,At noon,we had picnic near the town,Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery and we look a lot of picture there,In the afternoon,some of us fiding,some rowed boats on the water ,but others flew kites ,we both had a wonderful time!It was a plwasant trip for them,during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help,we have learned to help,understand and sharing with others,In a work,we have got quite a lot from it.
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Last Saturday ,the students of our class made a bike trap to a small town by the Taihu Lake,we set off earlier(改为early) in the morning,After getting to the town ,we had(去掉had) visited some places of interset,At noon,we had (加上a)picnic near the town,Everybody was attracted by the beautifully(改为beautiful) scenery and we look a lot of picture(改为pictures) there,In the afternoon,some of us fiding(改为rode),some rowed boats on the water ,but others flew kites ,we both (改为all)had a wonderful time!It was a plwasant trip for them(改为us),during which the boys were(去掉were) offered the girls a lot of help,we have learned to help,understand and sharing(改为share) with others,In a work,we have got quite a lot from it.
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Last Saturday ,the students of our class made a bike trap to a small town by the Taihu Lake,we set off earlier(改为early) in the morning,After getting to the town ,we had(去掉had) visited some places of interset,At noon,we had (加上a)picnic near the town,Everybody was attracted by the beautifully(改为beautiful) scenery and we look （改为took）a lot of picture(改为pictures) there,In the afternoon,some of us fiding(改为rode),some rowed boats on the water ,but others flew kites ,we both (改为all)had a wonderful time!It was a plwasant trip for them(改为us),during which the boys were(去掉were) offered the girls a lot of help,we have learned to help,understand and sharing(改为share) with others,In a work(改为word),we have got quite a lot from it.
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Last Saturday, our class made a bike trip to a small town by Taihu Lake. We set off early in the morning. After getting to the town, we visited some places of interest. At noon, we had a picnic near the town. Everybody was enthralled by the beautiful scenery and we look a lot of pictures. In the afternoon, some of us went on row-boats; others flew kites. We all had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip. During the trip the boys offered the girls a lot of help. We learned a lot about helping, understanding and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from this trip.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from this trip.
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