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It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the football. With an important match coming the next week, we decided to practice more ,because we both wanted to do well in the match. Suddenly, one of my friends fell over. I was shocked and run towards him. I saw blood with his head. Everyone felt scary. After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals. I also called her family to tell them about the accident. When we were sitting and waiting ,a doctor walked us and said that nothing seriously had happened and that my friend would recover soon. We were more than happier to hear that.

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It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing (去掉the) football. With an important match coming the next week, we decided to practice more, because we (both改成all) wanted to do well in the match. Suddenly, one of my friends fell (over改成down). I was shocked and (run改成ran) towards him. I saw blood (with改成on) his head. Everyone felt scary. After a while, we took him to the nearest (hospitals改成hospital). I also called (her改成his) family to tell them about the accident. When we were sitting and waiting, a doctor walked (加入to/towards/toward) us and said that nothing (seriously改成serious) had happened and that my friend would recover soon. We were more than (happier改成happy) to hear that.
1. 球类运动football前面无定冠词the
2. we不止两个人both，而是三者以上all
3. fall down 摔倒；fall over... 被...绊倒
4. 整句为一般过去时，所以用ran
5. with不通，用on表示“头上的血”
6. “最近的一家医院”，所以用单数hospital
7. 受伤者是男性，不是女性
8. walk是不及物动词，不能直接加us做宾语，而walk to/toward/towards us意思都是“朝我们走过来”
9. 形容词serious修饰代词nothing，而seriously是副词，不可能做定语
10. more than意思是“非常”= very，并不表示比较级，此时其后面加形容词/副词原级，而不是比较级