Question

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  As the economy of China has been developed very fast, more               1.________  and more and families are now rich enough to have their own cars. Cars do bendfit the families as well the society in many ways.                                          2.________  With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to and from work, They can also drive to the countryside on the                                                  3.__________  weekends. At the same time, the development of motor industry                    4.________  will syre give a push to many other ralated industries,                   5.___________  it is obviously beneficial to the social economy.              6.________  In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic            7._________  and environmental problems Waste gas from cars are causing             8.________  serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people's health.            9._______  With increasing number of cars on the roads, the traffil has become very heavy.

Answer 1

As the economy of China has been developed very fast, more 1.__去掉been______
and more families are now rich enough to have their own cars. Cars do bendfit the families as well the society in many ways. 2._well之后加上as_______
With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to and from work, They can also drive to the countryside on the 3.__drive后面加 it________
weekends. At the same time, the development of motor industry 4.__of后面加上the______
will sure give a push to many other ralated industries, 5.__sure改为surely_________
it is obviously beneficial to the social economy. 6.__正确______
In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic 7.__in改为on_______
and environmental problems Waste gas from cars are causing 8.__are改为is______
serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people's health.9.__do改为does_____
With increasing number of cars on the roads, the traffil has become very heavy.10_with后加a_____

Answer 2

1，把been 去掉，因为发展与中国之间是主动关系。
2 在as well 后加as (与。。。一样）而as well 是“也”的意思，往往放句末而且意思也不符合
3 把 on the weekends 的the 划掉。on weekends j就是周末的意思。
4 把 sure 改为 surly,
5 正确
6 in 改为on .一方面，on one hand.另一方面，on the other hand
7 把 are 改为is ,因为前面有and 连接
8 把do 改为 does
9在with 后加a. a number of .大量地