Question

大伙帮忙翻译一个句子！！！

在我们学校对面有一座购物中心，但是里面的商品性价比实在是太低了，而且几乎没有什么打折扣的东西。

上面这句话怎么翻译成英语呢？
我这么说行吗?
There is a mall locates opposite to our school . But the products in it with low cost performance and few of which at a discount .

不对的话帮我改过来~

Answer 1

There is a shopping mall locates opposite to our school but the product inside with a low cost performance and few of them have a discount.

追问

问一下，but 可以不写在一句话中吗？ 我有时候不会断句。而且Product 是不可数名词吗？

追答

but 是不可以写在句子的开头，但可以写在句子中
product 是可数名词
sorry 打错了是products
There is a shopping mall locates opposite to our school but the products inside have a low price,so few of them have a discount.

Answer 2

There is a shopping center opposite to our school.But there the performance price ratio
of product is low and there are few products on sale.
But 可以不写在一句话中,用逗号隔开，Product即可做可数名数，也可做集合名词用，即不可数名词。

Answer 3

There is a shopping center opposite to our school. the price of goods is so low that there is few discount there.